Progress

Today Emily and I have worked on perfecting the editing and Sam has improved the end screen for the trailer. We have decided to add a more complex narrative to our trailer by inserting scenes showing a doll which link to the girl's voice which says, 'I've lost my dolly, can you help me find her?' ending with the dolls head being smashed. We believe this will add depth to our trailer and improve the overall effect. We have also discussed re-filming the knife scene that we originally removed due to poor mise en scene and changing it so that it is a close up shot showing a knife spinning on the table, which would solve the problem of ineffective mise en scene.